Normally, when given a writing prompt for which you are asked to create an essay, you are not limited to a specific amount of time in which to analyze what you are being asked. That is not the case with the SAT Essay. You are given 25 minutes to dissect the prompt, plan your essay, write your essay, edit your essay, proofread your essay, and then make any necessary corrections.
Darkness is essential to humans. Here, Bogard talks about the importance of darkness to humans. Humans need darkness to sleep in order to be healthy. Animals also need darkness. Ecological light pollution is like the bulldozer of the night, wrecking habitat and disrupting ecosystems several billion years in the making.
Here Bogard explains that animals, too, need darkness to survive. Overall, this response demonstrates partially successful reading comprehension. The response demonstrates no understanding of the analytical task. Instead, the writer merely cites two sentences from the passage, and offers a brief restatement of each point.
Overall, this paper demonstrates inadequate analysis. This essay demonstrates little cohesion and inadequate skill in the use and control of language. Overall, this essay does not provide enough evidence of writing ability to warrant a score higher than a 1.
His essay talks about so much facts about sleeping how so little can effect us health wise examples like getting sleep disorders, diabetes, obesity, cardiovascular disease and depression. This facts helps people persuade the audience he also say that the world health organization classifies working night shift is bad.
In his argument is not all about how it bad for the body he also claims and have proof that light cost are expensive and really costing people because they have light all night long. He also claims light is messing with mother nature that animals need darkness to feed eat move around because there noctuaral creatures.
He has details facts about human body, animals and about mother nature that he can use to support his idea of not using so much light at night and how we need darkness.
With these features he can persuade the auidence because people dont know why darkness can be good for us. He was all of facts and examples that he claim is efficting us and there world. On the whole, this essay displays only a partial understanding of the source text.
This facts helps people persuade the audience. Other than identifying these as persuasive facts, however, the writer does nothing to indicate an understanding of the analytical task. The writer again mentions persuasion before the conclusion of the essay With these features he can persuade the auidence because people dont know why darkness can be good for usbut once again, there is no explanation of how or why these features are persuasive.
This response demonstrates little cohesion and inadequate skill in the use and control of language.
The response also lacks a recognizable introduction and conclusion, and sentences are strung together without a clear progression of ideas for much of the response, the writer merely lists claims Bogard makes. The response also lacks variety in sentence structures, in part because of repetitive transitions.
For example, he also claims is used two sentences in a row in this brief response.Millions of students take the SAT each year as a step on their path to college. Visit our site to learn about the test, register, practice, and get your scores. As you read the passage below, consider how Paul Bogard uses.
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